We’re going over old Asylum stuff tonight (like, three years old guys) and the opening line to this chapter was:
“Naj awoke the next morning feeling much like a peach – kinda fuzzy and stupidly sweet.”
What even? What. Even. Aside from not even kind of being in Naj’s voice, just what even?
Never feel bad about your writing. Especially the older stuff. Have a good laugh and move on.